Carrie, a 17 year old student, is walking home from school
when she stumbles on a rift (a tear of time and space, similar to a black
hole), it’s opened up and she falls through. She ends up in an alternate
dimension, which we will soon learn to be a form of purgatory (Limbo) in the
form of some sort of building/world. She immediately tries to escape after
coming into contact with spirits awaiting judgement, and uses every ounce of
her intelligence to try escape from this world. She soon realises this isn’t
working, nothing behaves like it should, everything changes around her, warps
and mutates every time she turns, she can’t think her way out of it. This isn’t
helped by the spirits who, as she starts realising that things may not be as
they seem, they taunt her and mocks her for these thoughts. They jeer, and
start revealing the truth about her plight and the world she now resides in;
they tell her she will never escape, she can’t escape, it can’t be done and
she’s a fool.
This idea was first conceptualised when I heard the brief, I
liked the idea of a literal land that time forgot, and instead of just doing
dinosaurs because I feel the dinosaurs are getting a bit over used and it’s
good to get out of my usual comfort zone. This lead me to the idea of somewhere
like purgatory, or just an empty space because I believe time simply wouldn’t
exist there; but as that had plot holes in, it began to make my whole idea fall
apart. From here I followed example from game company Valve and when they begin
a game they base it off a school of philosophy, quote, or a concept so I
followed a similar path and began thinking of what my story would personify. I
ended up wanting to go with philosophy that focuses on logic or stagnation
which are two concepts I already understand and relate to. During this research
I came across a notion created by John McDowell which refuted ‘The Myth of
Given’, he basically states that all empirical knowledge is essentially all
conceptual as it’s based only off our sense data, and without someone with an
entirely different physical perception on the universe, how are we to know what
we are perceiving is true? I really want to play with this in the idea as we
can relate a similar concept to time as time is a manmade concept we rely on
every day and treat as this ever present, ever controlling benchmark throughout
our whole life, despite the fact that we created it, so who are we to decide
when is late when as creators we could change the rules to fit our needs and
still be right. This will apply to my idea because the land the purgatory
resides on will be changing all the time depending on the perceivers of that
space.
I began by sketching the main character I had in mind to help get to grips with the software as I have to type it out and test it each time, so I made a basic sprite for this purpose. Then, when I had fleshed out the story and had gotten used to the scripting language, I began adding backgrounds to my pieces and another character. After that I coded in an intro, and a soundtrack, as well as refining the sprites to a more finished style with better shading and greater detail. Because of the time consuming nature of this project however, I could only code a simple introductory sequence for this story.
In the end I decided I wouldn’t end up pursuing this idea
for my final project, because I do love the idea but I only envisioned it in
the visual novel format. This would obviously not fit the brief and I feel the
other 2 mediums wouldn’t service this concept properly.
Here is some evidence of the research and work that went into this idea.
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An initial sketch for the main character, Carrie when shes afraid |
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Afraid Carries final version |
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A background I sketched for the rough version of the novel |
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The final version of Rex |
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The Spirit Tourguide 'Rex's inital sketch |
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Intro scenes sketch |
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Intro scenes with flat colours |
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Researching Schools of philosophy |
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Philosophy of Logic |
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Philosophy on conceptualism |
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The Myth of Stagnation in Philosophy |
Above is a recording of the visual novel being played, it is however lacking the soundtrack I added
due to the recording software I used. Also, the quality is incredibly bad in the recording but the source game is much cleaner and as I drew it.
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The coding language used to create this. |