Plot Points basic planning

Plot Points:

O.D case is a mystery

Cases of O.Ds build up

They find a link to a certain new chemical

Traces of it are followed to the centre of an illegal manufacturing facility

Once discovered, it incapacitates police, fbi, and military forces then spreads to general public

People don gas masks to prevent inhalation, most skin should be covered to slow down absorption through skin.

THIS IS ABSOLUTE WANKING SHIT BOLLOCKS WRITING TALIAH YOU FUCKED UP.

Ugh. Right I need to get this right, I can’t try get away with such a shitty story. This character lacks any motivation really. The story just escalates in such an idiotic way I can’t breath and the genres are flicking about like they have god damn bipolar. Git gud scrub. THE FUCKING VILLAIN NEEDS FUCKING MOTIVATION YOU TURD OF A WRITER.

Plot Points: Take 2.

O.D case is a mystery

Cases of O.Ds build up

They find a link between peoples darkest desires and the fact they are played out in their dreams before they die.

This is also a bad idea as I would like it to be a 15 at worst and this is definitely not a PG topic.

Okay, I’ll make a list of essentials that need to happen and fit a theoretical plot around those limitations to make a story.

O.D Cases on illegal bought drugs

Drugs contain mystery chemical that intensifies dreams but also causes fatal parasomnias

Drugs put in by accident or on purpose?

SCRATCH IT. I had a brainwave, I found a way to make the story short, but also compact and full of good bits, and hopefully a pretty alright story.

Short script:

Drug kills

Lots more death

Chemical Identified

Traced to drug ring headquarters

Police intoxicated/killed/ too weak to defeat (controlled by drug ring?)

MC decides to take them down in dream world with her new drug that causes mass mutual dreams, or just between her and big boss. Uses this and her extreme knowledge on dreams to take him out and end this. She also incapacitates the crones too at some point. And maybe she should have her assistant? But idk I don’t want him to be a hindrance.

Then she wins and the drug ring is defeated.

FINALLY A COHERANT SCRIPT BASE WITH LOGIC AND MOTIVATION. GRANTED I NEED TO WORK WAY MORE OUT BUT THANK CHRIST YOU GOT TO THIS POINT. YOU CAN EXPAND ON IT AND MAKE IT A KILLER ASS SCRIPT. BOOM. DONE.

Dream sequences before the final scene should be erratic and difficult to understand. They should hint at Mays internal issues, her struggle with self-identity, self-esteem, and the psychological issues she had as a child. These could expand from anything but essentially I want them to be based in a childhood issue of some form and linked in to hallucinations, and violence. I want it to be what breaks her in the final fight. She should be pushed and pulled until she breaks and the repressed feelings and emotions are released, nearly killing her but she pulls herself back in the end and kills the villain, or at least incapacitates him. But the final dream sequence should be planned as a scene and be easy to follow otherwise the message is lost. If her side of the dream becomes erratic, then it should be seen from the enemys point of view so that it’s easy to see what’s going on.